Keep writing these literary gems,
You have real talent there,
To be able to impart such strong emotions,
Is a gift that's rare.
I sympathise with those feelings,
They are not really bad,
We have all experienced such emotions,
They're a common thing to be had.
At the end of your terrific piece,
I simply wished for more,
I can't wait for your next endeavour,
To see what we have in store.
I look at your excellent poems,
With a longing stare,
I can't help but look at my stuff,
The two I then compare.
If they were music I'd be the Spice Girls,
Fast, trashy and fun,
My work is goofy and a trifle empty,
Over before it's begun.
But, you friend, would be Dylan,
Emotional in every way,
Your poetry is provactive and relational,
With something great to say.     

Great job, and don't wait too long before                                                   

the next one. Or, get really depressed or                                                   

pi$$ed off and write one to match your mood.                                                    

Cheers from the Land of Oz